Exploded Essay

James Van Der Zee. Couple in Raccoon Coats, 1932. © 1997.
All rights reserved by Donna Van Der Zee.

"Pictures" Question: Identify the formal element of line in this work. How does it work to create meaning or experience? What do you think this meaning or experience could be?

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    Van Der Zee uses line in Couple in Raccoon Coats to create a portrait of African American dignity and prosperity. Horizontal and vertical lines predominate.The central car provides the strongest horizontal statement. The implied lines of the car’s roof and running board echo the strong horizontal line of the chassis. The line of the man’s hat brim mimics that of the convertible top above it, as the line of the hem of the woman’s coat parallels that of the running board. This horizontal line repeats itself in the stairs, doors, and windows of the building behind the car. Yet equally strong straight vertical lines balance this horizontality; the lines of the building’s windows, doors, and banisters lead the eye up and down, as well as sideways. The car’s convertible top and windshield also project verticality, as does the edge of the open door. However, perhaps the strongest vertical lines can be located in the central figures, where the woman’s regal, upright posture is reflected in the confident lines of the seated man’s back. The heavy stripes of the raccoon coats also emphasize vertical line.


    Van Der Zee employs forceful lines to make the two figures the focal area; their placement in the intersection of the tranquil horizontal lines of the car and the dynamic vertical lines of the central staircase banisters, an area of symbolic tension, accentuates their importance.Adding even more emphasis are the curved lines of the wheels, which serve as end blocks to the line of the car, closing the composition and pushing attention inward to the figures. The strength of the car’s horizontal line further reinforces the couple at its center, as well as drawing attention to the gleaming length of the car itself. Once the eye focuses on the figures, not only does their verticality enforce the vital confidence of their posture but their clothing signals their material success. The fur coats, the woman’s fashionable cloche hat and high heels, the man’s crisp hat–all signify prosperity. Van Der Zee’s use of line to emphasize this stylish 1930s pair and their new car makes this photograph more than a studio portrait. The dignified elegance of the couple connotes a celebration of new African American identity–the success and achievement of the Harlem Renaissance.

 

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